Practice Intro’s
Into’s:
”Ma’ma when is papa gonna wake-up”.
These are the last words I remember telling my mother.In under an hour I lost both my parents one to a disease and the other to not being able to live without her partner, my father. I was just 5 years old when I was abandon by my own parents. Or were they really my parents? I was finding out the biggest secret of my life that only a handful of people knew.
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Causing tension is something I have always been good at. I don’t cause tension by my looks, but by what I say. I say the truth, what other people want to say but can’t, and sometimes the psycological unknown. I know what people are thinking at all times, the conversations that you have in your head I know the whole thing when I look into your eyes.
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Thesis:
I think children that have an open adoption are more likley to be less anxious, have better relationships and have fewer worries about where they came from than children that have a closed adoption.
Children that are adopted either have an open adoption (where they know there birthparents) or a closed adoption (where they don’t know there birthparents). I think children with an open adoption will worry less, have better relationships, and have less family worries then children that have a closed adoption.
A writing process envoles many steps. Everyone has there own writing process, but mine envoles a somewhat drone sounding topic and a not anybetter middle paragraph sometimes I can pull the conclusion out enough to have a small impact at the end. I know I need to use better sounding adjetives and more organization. If I can do these things I think I could get my papers to a more vivid picture to the audience.
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If your are adopted how do you feel? Is one emotion or several? Do you know your birthparents and if yes or no would you change that? We would get a slu or different answers from a variety of people. Does being adopted have an effect on your life? Does being adopted make you feel abandoned or lonley? Still to these questions to we would get many different answers with many different reasons.
I am adopted. Knowing that I am adopted doesn’t effect me. It’s more what goes along with being adopted. You have 2 mommys, 2 daddys, 4 sets of grandparents, and maybe some siblings. Wheter or not you talk to them or send them letters or e-mail them or don’t even talk to them at all they are still out there. Whether you want them to be or not. Sometimes its not even the adoptee that wont admit it or aknowledge it, sometimes its the birthparent. And sometimes there is no communication with either birthparent at all. I have 2 of the 3. I talk to my birthmom, her husband, my siblings from her and her parents. With my birthdad there is no communication at all. It’s like I Don’t exist in his world. He hasn’t even told some of his family.
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